This was an odd adventure, but realistic in the sense this is a beggar's tale. I would've liked to know more about the dreams he were having, were they his memories, distorted by time, or were they glimpses of the assassin's life? Thanks for your efforts on making this tale!
Migo Thu May 11 04:33:43 2017
Short - and the plot was quite random. I won it on the first playthrough, so I guess it was easy too.
Migo Thu May 11 16:37:31 2017
Oh, well, now I got the true ending. It's a memorisation process, and since you have no chance of going back, it feels random and arbitrary. Quite a lot of these project books are for some reason, which adds an unfair challenge of "guess what the author is thinking". Not my favourite cup of tea.
bluejuice915 Sun May 14 13:46:12 2017
This was good. I believe I have the "right" ending, but I'm not congratulated. I don't normally like books like this will less structured traveling, but this one was very well constructed. I commend the variety of choices and the quality battles. Making it longer to further develop the backstory would be nice. Grade: 98
RogueOne Wed Oct 25 22:35:00 2017
Done!
ur mom Tue Jul 31 19:54:48 2018
a good gamebook.
Gavin Thu Aug 2 11:48:32 2018
Died to lack of information (and lack of money ) DON'T DIE OF IGNORANCE
Gavin Tue Aug 7 13:28:49 2018
GANJEES happened.
paul Wed Mar 13 17:50:45 2019
that was unexpected! had my head chopped off by an assassin...
Fffan Sun May 5 01:13:21 2019
I dont like ont true path stories, this once required to start over multiple times until i found the right path by complete luck, and to be honest i an not sure of what i did right this time.
bill Fri Jul 5 15:58:57 2019
Really good!
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Love the Noose, really helps set the scene of Port Blacksand!
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bill Fri Jul 5 16:12:58 2019
HOORAY
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NO NO DECAPITATION BRO!!!!
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Delacroix Tue Aug 20 17:05:24 2019
Unexpected terrible ending.
kaven Thu Oct 24 14:05:03 2019
cool
Mage Mon Oct 18 06:58:36 2021
Very fun, but feels kind of underdeveloped. Or maybe there's just a bit too many red herrings that look interesting but don't really have any significance on the gameplay for plot. Still great fun.
bluejuice915 Wed Mar 1 12:09:12 2023
Finally went back & beat this one properly. Have mixed feelings about the "one true path" concept but I think this somewhat works. Need more than a little good luck to make it through too. Still enjoyed it & wish for a sequel. Oh well. 90/100.
Chris Haws Wed Aug 2 08:07:43 2023
I really enjoyed this one, it had a lot of the flavour of the original books and didn't try to be funny or political like a lot of the others on this site. My only criticism is that it was too short!
MPerera Sun Sep 3 15:00:42 2023
Finally won this one!
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I got killed multiple times because although I bought the vial of salve, I thought it had to be given or traded to someone.
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YARD Thu Sep 7 16:02:55 2023
This was going pretty well until the story felt the need to use the same plot twist as Escape Neuburg Keep. It felt really cheap there, and is not much better here, undercutting most of the initial narrative stakes just the same. And with how underwhelming the writing of the real primary villain is, I actually preferred the other, "failed" ending to the intended one.
Proofreading (mostly missing hyphens here.)
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Stormsday Morning
"well-connected"
Stormsday Afternoon
"strange sounding"
Moonsday Morning
"heat absorbing"
Stormsday Morning + Stormsday Afternoon+ 3 + 25 + 27 + 44 - extra spaces before question marks.
Fireday Afternoon
"fit looking"
4
"lashes your face blinding you." (missing comma?)
7
"white faced"
8
"Well pleased"
13
“sun browned"
19
"boarded up door" (twice)
25
"a beggar still."
35
"not the assassins"
43
"poison tipped tail"
46 "wicked looking"
49
"villainous looking man." + "won't save you this time" he states" + "no longer" you declare (missing comma in both.)