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ffproject Fri Nov 18 17:22:18 2011
Sharkbait's Revenge
Stuart Lloyd's Windhammer 2010 competition-winning gamebook is now ready for online play.
The ship is now sinking fast. The rest of the crew are on the lifeboats heading to the island. You notice that they haven't left you one. They see you as responsible for causing this disaster and if they catch you on the island they will probably skin you alive. However, the island is the only escape you've got...
Jordan Wed Nov 23 01:15:19 2011
Excellent gamebook, Stewart. Just got one question. I've restarted a few times when my skill is low. Is there any way that your skill rises above 9? I've done everything but am having trouble defeating the ninja. Is there an item that might come into use? Thanks.
Stuart Wed Nov 23 15:42:44 2011
Thanks for the feedback, Jordan! For increasing your attack strength, make sure that if you get a weapon you click use for it or you will get a -2 penalty in combat. The shield increases your attack strength by 1 and the leather armour can protect you against some attacks. You can buy all of these from the armourer. Read the spoiler if you want to know how to defeat the ninja without fighting him:
SPOILER
You need to go to the bath house and become a lookout for a robbery. Then you need to break into a warehosue to get weapons for your men and select the bamboo stick. It scares the ninja away. You may need to sell your treasure so you do not buy the weapons instead.
END SPOILER
pi4t Fri Nov 25 15:03:59 2011
I've found a minor bug with Sharkbait: If you don't have your lucky doubloon, the game still lets you click on the 'buy the map' section on board the ship, effectively letting you have it for free.
Thanks for pointing this out. If it was reference 30 then I believe I have fixed it.
adam Thu Jan 19 07:29:20 2012
Just played sharkbait, loved the Deadliest warrior and Family Guy references!!!! Oggityboogityboo!!!
Dunshelm Fri Nov 15 22:54:18 2013
What a tedious game,you make the wrong move and you end up going around in circles
Maybe there should be a gamebook that always leads you to a successful conclusion, regardless of the choices you make.
Phil Sadler Sat Nov 16 11:27:13 2013
Funny you should say that about gamebooks, because there are video games that are impossible to lose. Take the strange Typing of the Dead (House of the Dead with swearing). It has infinite continues and, should you continue after you die, you will start of exactly where you were, any bosses still wounded and your own health recovered.
Ridiculous.
Rather than repeated resurrection, what I think I was envisaging was that the hero would be destined for victory one way or another, and all decisions the player made, however stupid, would ultimately lead there.
pi4t Tue Nov 19 13:21:43 2013
There are computer games which it's impossible to lose, merely change your route to victory. Antichamber is one: failing, say, a jump, and falling into a pit, doesn't cause you to die but means you take another, perhaps harder, but entirely different route through the next part of the game. Planescape: Torment, I understand, has a major plot point that the main character is unable to die (much as, perhaps, they'd like to).
D-L-T Mon Nov 25 02:54:17 2013
it's not that I didn't like the sound of the "Challenge mode" :) it's just that I haven't really had time to play around that much lately!
gigs Thu Dec 19 15:45:01 2013
after the armour seller talks to you and tells you to meet him in the watchtoer their is not an option to do that?
brandon Tue Dec 31 19:05:11 2013
It was a very interesting experience
gigs Fri Jan 10 17:45:55 2014
How do you enter the armourey?
Gigs Mon Jan 20 16:54:53 2014
I am stuck on it!
Jest Wed Apr 2 22:36:09 2014
Completed and managed to get the Ghandi challenge (doesn't make me a coward does it?) Have tried this one many times in the past and kept coming back. Good fun and funny in a lot of places. You really have to work it out and try a lot of the options to get through. Thank you Stuart Lloyd and FFP.
Sunni Fri Jun 20 03:51:37 2014
Never underestimate the power of the bamboo stick!
Nice short story though you could keep going around in circles if you didn't do the right thing.
On to the nect challenge
7 down
Sunni Sat Jun 21 13:24:57 2014
Ok, I've completed all the challenges except 1, the rich man's challenge.
It doesn't show even when I have 55 pieces of eight and 2 treasures!
Sorry about this. I've belatedly fixed it and given you the icon you deserved at the time.
Ryan Sun Nov 2 22:38:55 2014
A really good book and is exciting
dark Tue Mar 31 21:27:41 2015
Rather fun even if the writing style was a little short and a lot of the game felt run on dice rolls. Actually in the last fight I confess I replayed a few times, indeed it strikes me this is one where high attribute scores really! are a necessity.
Still, love the theme of pirates and the nods to that awsome novel, On Stranger Tides by Tim Powers which also features Black beerd by the name of Ed Thatch who plats his beerd with burning ropes (though I was a little surprised there wasn't more Voodoo).
I just wish some of the descriptions hadn't been quite as terse so that I got more of a sense of the colourful setting.
imflipinawsome Tue Sep 22 13:53:31 2015
Well... i did have fun so thats good
Mage Sat Jan 9 10:28:16 2016
Hmmm...I can't seem to fulfil the "Rich Challenge" either.....
Mage Sat Jan 9 10:29:21 2016
Sorry, ignore that last post, I mis-read the condition.
Mage Sun Jan 10 04:59:12 2016
Done! :D
job Sat Dec 31 16:29:13 2016
After a while the only thing I could do was either leave on a ship or keep hanging around in the market.
bluejuice915 Thu Mar 30 18:44:54 2017
Well, it took several tries but I finally did it. The intricacy of what you could do to win was cool. The scarce battles were good, and the choice heavy gameplay was great. I will return at some point to find the other ending and challenges in of Your Teeth completed]. Until then, perfect degree of annoying difficulty. Grade: 97
RogueOne Tue Oct 24 22:29:31 2017
Done!
Anomynous Fri Nov 10 14:48:03 2017
bad ending
paul Sun Mar 17 18:35:40 2019
died in combat :(
Jay Sun Jan 17 16:29:37 2021
I completed it! Good adventure!
Choi Seungcheol Mon Apr 19 09:07:30 2021
well that was a bit disappointing
Mage Mon Oct 18 04:22:38 2021
Not bad, but a couple more LUCK bonuses to be gained would have been nice....
YARD Wed Aug 23 13:48:50 2023
Wow, after first finding challenges after beating Outsider!, I didn't expect a gamebook with a much lower length to also sport them, but it certainly deserves it! Unlike Douglas' similarly-sized works, Windjammer limitations are almost imperceptible here. The only example I can think of is when at 150 (or the equivalent ref if you follow the other path), there is no option to flee yourself if you do not have all of the requirements, and instead your character automatically marches on to his entirely predictable doom.
Besides Skin of Your Teeth, I also got Gandhi and The Other Successful Ending, but then I restarted instead of playing the challenge button again, and the record of that was lost. Still not sure how to get the Rich challenge, and the Warrior appears really luck-dependent.
If there's one thing I have to ask, it's this: do those scrolls actually work? I tried on refs 112, 5 or 77, to no avail. Even if the character in those refs is somehow not the right person (which seems extremely unlikely) at least some acknowledgement of you trying and failing would seem necessary?
Another thing is something I spotted in Rise of the Night Creatures as well: your most basic weapon (Butcher Knife in there, and a Dagger here) auto-equips, but the next strongest one (Silver Dagger and Sword) does not, even though it is entirely possible to find either of them while empty-handed.
Before I go for my usual haul of typos, I want to note a certain pecularity in writing, which occurs very often (though not always) to the point I'm not sure if it's intentional or not. This is the propensity to follow up quoted speech with capitalized verbs, which I am pretty sure is not the way, but is the norm here. The exceptions are something like ref 8, where it's "backstabbed us' shouts Blutz", and the norm is that path's ending ref, where it's "captain.' Says Blutz." or Background, with its "He won't forget who's in charge now!" Laughed the captain." If the capitalized way is wrong, then pretty much every ref with direct speech (i.e. ref 7) would need to be checked.
Now...
7
"He speaks with the upper class accent of a man who mixes with royalty regularly 'Why share your " (missing period.)
"pulls out a pistol and points it a Brandon's head. "
"You don't think I would make" (shouldn't it be past sense?)
15
"They rest upon what looks like giant threads of spider silk" (not sure about singular vs. plural)
44
"'Listen,' replies the small man 'All you need" (missing period.)
48
"You see the eyes widen as you reveal the treasure you have bought with you."
53 Is it intentional that Skull and Crossbow is not italicized?
58 "His warm, friendly, outgoing personality must his antidote to smelling of fish the whole time."
68
"put his cronies in charge of the city and the sent his men through the streets, arresting and executing so called followers of Caldoss."
77
"but he is not buying it 'How do I know" (missing period.)
78 In front of the door are two guards.Will you: (missing space.)
84
"I'm sure will you need it"
90 "One of their ships has weighed anchor just outside the reef Relieved" (missing period.)
"if your ex shipmates did tell them" (missing dash?)
121 "The spider trips up over a human skeleton, leaving to enough time to flee from the clearing."
I didn't get the full quote from ref 35, but I think that the sentence with "Fishpool Street" also should be double-checked.
Thanks, fixed the clear mistakes. I don't have the inclination to go through and correct the punctuation relating to quotations, especially as I'm not certain how it works myself. All the challenges can be done but of course luck plays a part. The scrolls do work and where to use them is not an arbitrary guess, there are clues in the text.
YARD Sat Aug 26 05:20:46 2023
All right, all challenges done!
I obviously did find ref 38 now, but I still think that using the scrolls should do something in the aforementioned refs 112, 5 or 77. There is no way that particular character wouldn't have reacted to those being in your presence! You even get "Galron is not here" when you try to use them some of the unrelated refs (perhaps that short message ref should trigger every time you try to use the scrolls on any refs besides the right one and those?), but there, it's just nothing.
Also, in the same ref 38:
"'Thankyou!' He exclaims and hugs you."
28
"and plunges his sword in one of the soldier's neck." (?)
58:
"There are three other places which may be interesting : a bathhouse,"
I also just noticed this at 78
SPOILER
"You and your crew have shared many dangers and celebrations for you to leave them now. They also owe you a lot of money. Determined to save your shipmates, you set out to the governor's large decadent residence. The gaol is beneath it. You and your men head to the governor's residence." - Which men? I thought that unlike the Corbett path, here you just talked to one sailor, and then left towards the jail on your own? The refs stemming from the immediately subsequent decisions seem to confirm that.
END SPOILER
and at 16
SPOILER
" your men throw two soldiers off the jetty" even if you had already fought and killed them both. I suppose replacement guards could have been assigned, sure, but some acknowledgement of that past combat would be nice.
END SPOILER
Why should the scrolls do anything at 112, 5 or 77 ? The character in question isn't there, and even if he was, why would he react to them being in your possession? He would only know that you had them if you showed them to him.
YARD Sat Aug 26 05:23:23 2023
Oh, and if "punctuation relating to quotations" is about the upper-case vs. lowercase right after quotations, I should note that seemingly every other gamebook I can think of uses lowercase. (i.e. ref 7 in The Word Fell Silent.)
YARD Sat Sep 2 11:48:36 2023
OK, I'll spell it out if I have to.
SPOILER
1) The character who IS present at 112, 5 or 77 spends most of his time in "polemics against Governor Brandon and the 'Secret Merchant Elite'".
2) At 77, he demands proof that "you're not one of them".
3) At 84, the scrolls explicitly mention "the Secret Merchant Elite", as well as encouraging the fight against Brandon.
4) Ergo, it seems obvious that your character would try and present those scrolls as a proof. Even if their presence would somehow backfire, it makes no sense to hold onto them and not show them in this situation.
END SPOILER
Another observation.
SPOILER
At 124, you lose 2 Stamina if you have no weapon, 1 Stamina if you have a dagger...yet, if you have an Axe, you still lose 2 Stamina instead of 1 or even none?
Further, at 2: "Your fresh water has run out and you endure more of the Sun. Hunger also sets in - lose 1 STAMINA point." - wouldn't a waterskin have at least SOME impact on this?
END SPOILER
Some more grammatical details:
58
"that catches your eye is the barbers." (apostrophe?) + "which may be interesting :" (space).
68
"runs away to the leg that you can now see." (to a leg?)
I also have to ask about the missing hyphens.
SPOILER
1
"your so called mateys"
15
"half devoured"
47
"well worn"
58
"self inflicted"
68
"so called followers of Caldoss."
and
118
"ex shipmates" (option.)
END SPOILER
Anonymous Sat May 4 17:10:29 2024
Accidentally went for the quitter ending. Very fun. Usually these games are hard fantasy so playing something with pirates was cool. (Wish I had something to submit to this site but all my games use self made systems :
Stuart Lloyd Mon May 6 06:28:13 2024
Many thanks for the feedback. Sharkbait's Revenge had a self made system originally, but I converted it to FF. You could too!
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