Not sure, perhaps there are better endings, although I became king...
Evan Fri Jul 31 12:34:42 2015
Great story!
The james Wed Oct 28 14:32:32 2015
Great, i love it
ana Mon Feb 8 21:08:39 2016
i am so bad at math i couldnt get past the spell measurements
Kieran Wed Feb 17 15:07:06 2016
Ana, you can beat it without having to do that particular puzzle.
Prax Tue Nov 1 14:07:26 2016
Epic!!!
bluejuice915 Tue Mar 28 02:23:19 2017
OK, so I found a technical victory
SPOILER
the one where Melchion is killed and you take his place.
END SPOILER
That's good enough for me. An all-decision book is OK, but I usually like having battles. Great job with what fairly little I found. Quality writing and genius plot. No criticism beyond battles. Grade: 99
Salrik Strongbow Wed Aug 9 02:03:38 2017
That was not only hilarious to play through (I actually played through and found every ending I could) but the 'real' ending was surprisingly heartwarming and lovely.
This is my favorite adventure I've had so far. Thank you.
Raymond Thu Sep 14 09:07:21 2017
Hmm. Interesting maths puzzle at the start. The ending took me by surprise, not sure if there are multiple endings or not. Quite an interesting twist to the tale.
YU Mon Nov 6 12:24:24 2017
SHORT STORY
Rafał Tue Feb 6 16:00:34 2018
It is very super and sadness history. goodbye.
Víctor Mon Apr 2 22:03:11 2018
LOL
Rob Sat May 12 18:25:45 2018
Cool!
Rob Sat May 12 18:47:22 2018
Very kinky one that
paul Mon Mar 18 11:19:53 2019
what a thoroughly odd gamebook. i was tortured to death by a dom dwarf. i enjoyed it though. the gamebook, that is. i might enjoy the torture too, but that's another matter.
Melchion the Modest Wed Jun 5 20:07:25 2019
Why did I die?
oakley Mon Mar 23 03:40:23 2020
ok
Yaztromo Wed Apr 8 08:17:34 2020
Every time I play this little, lovely adventure I find something fun that I didn't notice previously...
Noel M Thu Jan 7 16:57:16 2021
Very witty and quirky, highly entertaining. Great job!
Mage Mon Oct 18 02:48:35 2021
Always an entertaining read, no matter which of the many paths I take! :D