I have enjoyed all your games. I would like more options during the game. I finished this game pretty easily compared to your others. I just had to find the right combination
Rhian Sat Jan 4 08:23:41 2014
An excellent and overall enthralling tale of lore
ausmisc Sun Jan 5 02:55:29 2014
RIP me
ben Sun Jan 5 11:45:10 2014
enjoyed it, but it seemed like the ravage was impossible to kill...
Laney Sun Jan 5 15:43:09 2014
Not bad at all! Got through it first go, and my chosen field of strength didn't appear to be relevant (I chose stealth incidentally), but I enjoyed it!
All chosen fields are relevant, although it might not always be obvious from the text alone. Each potentially offers a different way of weakening the Ravager, which hopefully tips the balance between a likely victory and a likely defeat.
gigs Mon Jan 6 10:16:40 2014
Killed ravanger
killa Tue Jan 7 02:22:02 2014
killed the ravager of men
Thantos Thu Jan 9 06:49:19 2014
The death was to swift, needs more choices
Kayoss123 Fri Jan 10 02:28:01 2014
I liked it, but I guess my tactics weren't good enough. :D
DragonRaid Sat Jan 11 00:19:00 2014
This was very engaging! The first one I had done online. Very well worth it, and I am encouraged to try this again and attempt some more of the stories.
Great site and a good interface! It flowed in a very logical and non-distracting way so that the story was able to be entered into and enjoyed in an immersive way...for an experience that I was hoping for.
Thank you!
Thanks very much.
bcyy Mon Mar 31 03:45:50 2014
Only managed to get Ravager down to SKILL 11, STAMINA 60 on first attempt, hoping to do better in second.
Also, I've got an intense feeling of deja vu reading this gamebook.
bcyy Mon Mar 31 07:53:22 2014
Third try, got its STAMINA down to 3...
bcyy Mon Mar 31 08:24:41 2014
Brilliant story, unexpected ending!
Got it on my fifth try, 6 STAMINA left. Never expected stealth to be so useful in that situation. Is there a way to make it to the end without having to duel Ravager 1 on 1 in the end?
Also, will there be a sequel?
bcyy Mon Mar 31 08:35:50 2014
BTW, IMHO so far,
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herbology can be used for poison, but doesn't seem worth it since getting the poison means giving up Steelfang;
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swordsmanship is nowhere near enough in terms of raw firepower to kill Ravager without some lucky dice-rolls;
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thaumatology provides a special power that should scare trolls, but I never found out how to use it; :-(
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so there must be other ways to take advantage of those abilities, which I haven't found out yet.
Ulysses Tue Apr 1 03:15:21 2014
@bcyy:
In the battle against the Ravager, your companions will always be killed until you are the only one left. That's by design, so it isn't possible to save any of your companions.
I know the ending makes it sound like it's setting up for a sequel, but I never intended one. I just needed to finish the story with something dramatic.
With regards to the special skills, there are indeed uses for each that you haven't discovered; but this doesn't mean that they are all equal. I wasn't really concerned with balancing the effect of each, but rather with making sure each could either benefit you in some way or damage the Ravager. So the choice of some special skills could definately be better than others.
bcyy Tue Apr 1 04:56:35 2014
@Ulysses
Thanks for the reply! Pity there's no sequel...
Altais Mon May 12 06:54:51 2014
I enjoyed this adventure a lot, took me several tries to get through it and work out tactics. The ending was both fitting and amusing. :)
jason Thu May 22 03:32:52 2014
So I made my skill role and I died anyway. Is this adventure suppose to be a lesson in futility?
Pita Tue Sep 2 06:42:50 2014
I didn't win, but my journey was one to remember. I loved The Ravages Of Fate
Cris Fri Dec 26 01:34:38 2014
Loved the story it was pretty good. Enjoyed my entire adventure.
Stinger Mon Dec 29 21:56:11 2014
I liked this game book very much. I've played it several times. Still, death seems to wait for me at the end like it knew I'd be there to meet it
Best I've done was to get the final fight with the beast down to 43 stamina. But of course by then, my skill was 9 and stamina 10. It'd be nice if my energy total played a part in the final fight somehow. Maybe using up the last of my energy enabling me to fight on for two or more desperet rounds.
Great job! And thanks! :)
Tudi20 Sun Jan 4 13:46:40 2015
This is my end:
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97 You see the view in front of you suddenly tilt, and feel something hit your side. Things are growing dim as you slowly realise that you have fallen over. You try to move, but sharp pain makes you give up at once. The Ravager is stalking towards you, but you aren't afraid. You know you are escaping, and once your eyes close you hear only silence. THE END
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Yes, that's the standard one if you run out of ENERGY or STAMINA in the main fight.
Abu Wed Apr 8 01:02:06 2015
Did anyone ever win ?
AlogicA Sat Aug 27 00:31:02 2016
Enjoyed It
kaio Thu Mar 9 14:44:19 2017
ez, all u need to do is sleep
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just sleep
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bluejuice915 Wed Mar 15 18:27:18 2017
Great game. The battle was just tough enough to warrant repeat plays to win. The conclusion was slightly confusing at first, but proved to be a quality ending. Great job with game play and the choice of character at the beginning. I'm still not sure, because of how I played, what use the last two were, but still good. Grade: 97
Stinger Thu Mar 16 03:36:45 2017
I hate trolls, and this one in particular! rofl It was a fun run though once again. Maybe one day I'll take him down :) thanks a heap for the fun times here. :D
sssssssssssssss Wed May 17 17:40:03 2017
It's impossible to win
Riftwaker Tue Sep 26 16:10:38 2017
A great story with a difficult battle. Really enjoyed it.
RogueOne Fri Oct 20 20:05:19 2017
Done!
Fra Fri Mar 23 23:18:59 2018
Mainly a story, not too much in choice. But still enjoyable read
paul Wed Mar 20 18:22:24 2019
nowhere near! he still had 50 stmina points!
god Wed May 27 07:15:11 2020
good
Mage Thu Oct 21 04:21:53 2021
Troll-slayer!
wit Mon Oct 3 21:16:28 2022
hard but fun
YARD Tue Sep 12 06:21:04 2023
Masterful. Simply masterful. Very strong descriptive writing, a convincing low-magic world, and simply excellent characterization of everybody. Even the single-scene POV character who appears for just the final ref is better written than the pivotal characters of too many other works.
It works well at what it sets out to do also, as even though there's a lot of text and relatively little room for choice in the opening stretches, it feels far more natural here than in, say, Above the Waves or Any Port in a Storm, which felt outright stifling. And of course, there's the battle which is perhaps not as extensively written as the author would have liked, but still has a fair room for variation (it felt amazing when, trying out a few things after already winning twice before, I actually managed to win without seeing the combat interface.) There's perhaps only a little weirdness which may not be intentional.
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Around ref 45 can get Energy to 0 and still keep subtracting from it (though if that happens, you'll surely fall not long after anyway.)
Gouge is protected by his breastplate from getting crushed, yet your own breastplate does not protect your ribs at all when he is hurled at you? Does the breastplate actually make it more likely you get hit? Or is it simply irrelevant vs. the troll, much like the shield and helmet appear to be? After a few runs, including four victories, it felt like only the lantern actually made any real difference, and the other item could be literally anything?
Also still not sure about the box's relevance. My only guess is that it makes you more likely to get attacked first, but that could just be how the dice rolled behind the scenes that time.
I was going to say that it felt like you could keep "hanging back for now" to regenerate your energy with no seemingly no ill consequence - neither the risk of one of the companions getting killed, nor the risk of The Ravager regenerating a bit more. Then I tried it again, and noticed that it could lead to The Ravager just attacking you first, and potentially instakilling you.
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And of course, the now-traditional proofreading section. This wor
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BEYOND THE JAW
Sometimes uses "nondescript" and sometimes "non-descript" + "Will you talk to :"
INTO THE PIT
"The soot covered ground" + "The pit is a large crater" + "within the pit" (capitalization?) + "and find a ravine stones that ends in a large cave." (?)
8
"you never forget that you are could at any moment"
9
light the cast iron stove. + "Just anything that can help us. (missing quotation mark.) + You also see a rude path leading up to a hilltop. (rude or crude?)
"that are the gristly work" (grisly?) + " until their hair faces and skin" (comma?) + "another broad flat stone covered in dark bloodstains a table;" (?) + "You can see only his legs" (only see?) + " but a intelligent being" (an?) + "all he meant to do was distract you." (to distract?) + " Dark grimed in armour" (?)
30
"it is been eaten on the spot." (being?)
35
"with one claw fingered hand" (hyphen?)
46
"to avoid breathing in ashes" (the?)
59
"Do you want to :"
64
"coming to seeing the smudged sky rippling above you"
66
"Do you want to :"
70
"As the sword comes free a agonising roar "
75
"Do you want to :"
80
"cold and careless his eyes" ("his" should probably be the first word here?)
87
"turn and stark to quietly follow"
90
" only a moments warning"
100
"a normal sized troll" + "seemed to be in earnest."