Below Zero Point

How did one of Obsidian's leaders get a life sentence even after cooperating, yet a traitor to P.I.s who went rogue and got at least two important people killed only got five years?

And if von Rhein's research is so important, and he lives in Berlin, then how was he even able to get to Polaris without any agencies taking notice and attempting to stop him from leaving, or at least to escort him once he's there? Same goes for his assistant, for that matter. It's weird to see him telling the news about the club with no explanation that it's on Polaris, as if everyone watching on Earth or other worlds is supposed to know where exactly it is.

I think it says that Energizer Capsules heal 6 Stamina points when you first buy them, yet they actually restore 4?

Does Sighted Rifle actually add 1 Skill?

Gas Mask does not protect from Dire Wolf's Sentinel's gas?

Why does a guy in a thermal suit care about a bullwhip?

This story insists of writing "co-ordinates" and "no-where" like this, seemingly in contradiction to modern accepted grammar rules.

1

"Estimated landing time fifteen minutes, en-counting..."

3

"with a much (more?) fearsome weapon"

11

"into ones private affairs." + "If it's answers your looking for"

41

"in the chest-plate." + "is meant to de-activate." (are hyphens needed here?) + "It's trigger-finger pulls" (at least one typo here, if not two.)

49

"it's a spherical robot designed for scouting and guard duties - and occasionally employed as shock teams." (singular vs. plural?)

66

"into a hexagonal shaped chamber" (isn't it either a "hexagonal chamber" or "hexagon-shaped chamber"?)

90

"and a few accurate gun-shots destroys" (singular vs. plural + hyphen)

93

"There's no-where to hide" + "it soon catches you up."

103

" set into the right hand wall." (hyphen?)

120

"for their lack in respect"

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"left hand door"

133

"by using enzymes which melts snow into water" + ""Just don't be late back. " (?)

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"representing the law, and enforcing where it is being abused. "


"An electronic voice beyond (what?) says: "Room service.""

"The correct custom is usually (for?) the guest to ask for 'room service'! "

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"so well armed."

158

"you have to re-assess" + "It's a good place as any" (as good a place as any?) + "the business (end?) of the city." + "enticing those to dare their luck and risk their money." (who dare to?)

162

"the words 'Access Achieved' flashes repeatedly." (singular vs. plural)

165

"ipping wine from fluted glass" (glasses?) + "to give vent a scream." (?)

182

"terrorism might slowly spread into the Hostile Territories."

197

"was so well protected"

200

"Colonel Aaron Drake is one of few humans ever to have been born on Earth." (???)

218

"a waitresses approaches you;"

219

"A fact that the Polaris Bear took advantage" (of?)

253

"is no-where to be seen"

279

"with some co-ordinates" (twice)

309

" this area is known to" (for?) + "their problematical contents" (problematic?)

314

"What miracle is this? your mind shouts." (quotation marks?)

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"You've heard tell of such headstrong pioneers" + "of modern day adventurers" (hyphen?)

341

"It's lacquered black chasse" (Its, and chassis?)

343
Your knife blade (apostrophe?)

354

"Bionic hands flex, their steely grip brandish laser scalpels." (?)

357

"how little defensive methods have changed little"

367

"in the Federations secret network" + "was attracted by an alternative lifestyle" (to?)

373

"Chaser lines (up?) his rifle"

376

"You find him sprawled on the paving."

484

"the more of us there is"