Thu Dec 4 14:49:05 2014
Escape Neuburg Keep |
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Tammy Tue Nov 4 04:18:52 2014 |
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I tried. Novels are easier to write then gamebooks. |
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Yaztromo Tue Nov 4 19:54:35 2014 |
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Believe me: you can do it! ;-) BTW where can we read your novels? |
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Phil Sadler Tue Nov 4 23:37:55 2014 |
| I've written a few short stories but novels have always seemed far too much like hard work. |
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Tammy Wed Nov 5 04:15:05 2014 |
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I don't have anything published right now. Next year, perhaps? I'll let you know. I write horror stories mostly, but lately I've been busy with this gamebook fetish. Gamebooks are a difficult thing to master. I praise those with the gift for it. |
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Richard Evans Thu Dec 4 14:49:05 2014
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| Escaped - and died... |
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Phil Sadler Fri Dec 5 00:01:11 2014 |
| That's not the final ending ;) |
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Cian Mon Dec 8 01:09:44 2014
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| Wow ... you've taken the creepy, slightly disturbing aspects of Escape from NIghtmare Castle and ramped them up to a torture-porntastic 11! |
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Louise Tue Dec 16 01:51:33 2014
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| I loved it and found it fascinating yet gruesome |
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Jordan Sun Dec 21 04:12:31 2014 
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| Phew, I escaped with my life and the others that suffered the same predicament as I will be healed as good as new! Very gory, but a great gamebook nevertheless. Kudos Tammy! |
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asgardian Mon Jan 5 01:36:41 2015 |
| I agree with Dark - while descriptive the torture is overdone and there are far too many Tests of abilities. The plot is also flawed as the hero and Margrave in the original adventure cleared the castle of the Southerners. The old Priest the hero aids would also know of any last resistance. That said, a nice try at atmosphere. Try The Bodies on the Docks or Golem Gauntlet for games that really hold the reader. |
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LesseZ Thu Jan 8 14:29:55 2015
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I think this was very gruesome, to say the least.
SPOILER
I did like the writing style though. I could easily imagina what the scene looked like, and I must say, it didn't look pretty. |
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Drekketh Thu Jan 22 10:11:37 2015
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| Most immersive, although is addressed only to mature audience. A thing that has to be definately mentioned at the beginning of the book. |
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Paul Miller Fri Feb 6 12:31:31 2015
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| I'm alive. For now. Quite pornographic in its use of gore. Lacking subtlety. |
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Jansen Wed Feb 18 16:04:10 2015
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| Good and well thought out |
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Half Pint Sat Feb 21 11:47:48 2015
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| Well done; a dark and well-written adventure, the only thing was I seemed to complete it rather quickly, - with the guards swarming in and rescuing everyone, having not revealed any information to the priests, but I was wondering if that is the .true ending. Been a fan of Fighting Fantasy since I was seven, nearly thirty now, and always enjoy a well-written fan quest. |
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ChessVolt74 Tue Feb 24 09:16:18 2015
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| Wow, intense |
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Phil Sadler Tue Feb 24 12:34:24 2015 |
| That's the true ending Half Pint. |
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Gavin Tue Mar 17 13:13:15 2015
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| Technically adept but seems more like the Saw or Hostel movies than most gamebooks, which gave the player opportunity to solve puzzles, overcome obstacles , defeat adversaries and be heroic. The sexualised violence is especially jarring, like some of Literotica's more extreme entries. That said there's certainly a fascination to this and I shall almost certainly try again. |
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Gavin Tue Mar 17 16:53:18 2015
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| Finally defeated this, feeling exhausted and having gone through endless endurance trials like the protagonist... It was certainly addictive but it feels more like a punishment test than a victory. Perhaps that was the intention. |
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Tammy Tue Mar 17 23:11:05 2015 |
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This mini gamebook is only a toothpick in the hordes of jarring sexualised violence gamebooks I've written. Some are so crude I dare not have them put on this website. Thanks for playing. |
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